I assume this is the one you were wanting me to take a look at. Can't say I know much about the character. The pose is a little confusing, or at least how it's cropped here. The way the goggles are placed across the face in space is well done though.

The mouth is a little vague too, at least with the teeth. I typically try to generalize teeth instead of putting a bunch in there, but that's just me.

Of course, you can take all this and tell me to shove it. Completely fine. I like the idea though man, definitely something you can develop.

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But I like pulp, stupid!

thanks! The character is one of mine, hopefully adding more of them on here later